Scope by leiko
leiko

Photograph: me
Model: my boyfriend and a Bar 10

For the upcoming short we are making
Please give constructive feedback, because we are going to take one more photoshoot, and then we are going to start filming! We need advice on photography, art direction, lighting, costuming, etc...

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  • Vegard7

    Vegard7

    Really cool idea :) Good job.

    Dec 8th Reply .
  • pennyu

    pennyu

    don;t shoot me

    Jul 23rd Reply
  • Peug

    Peug

    Stunning composition and focus too:D

    Jun 28th Reply
    • leiko

      leiko

      Thank you for the kind comment.

      Jun 28th Reply Feel free to contact me
  • laggtastic

    laggtastic

    Wow....
    that looks pretty cool!
    I love scopes of guns...I dunno why,
    they have something...cool haha=D

    A very nice shot, cool focus and the square shape is realy cool!

    Jun 26th Reply
  • Substracto

    Substracto

    I like the focus here, and how you managed to square the picture, its more sharp :)

    Jun 21st Reply
    • leiko

      leiko

      Thank you =) Playing with focus is fun.

      Jun 21st Reply Feel free to contact me
  • Venusa

    Venusa

    I like this. Still, I would have to agree with 7Shadows though that the focus is off. I would like to see the scope and/or gun in more clear focus, while keeping Darren blurry-- it creates a sort of the-person-is-lost-behind-the-weapon (or, reaching a bit further, individuals-are-forgotten-during-times-of-ware) message that I think could be rather powerful.

    Feb 15th, 2011 Reply
    • leiko

      leiko

      That was exactly what I was going for! Muahaha, that is why you are my blonde twin.

      Feb 15th, 2011 Reply Feel free to contact me
    • Venusa

      Venusa

      Oooh, that's awesome!

      Feb 15th, 2011 Reply
  • 7Shadows

    7Shadows

    When I saw this I thought it was pretty professional. I think the focus is a bit awkward in the sense that we see the screw sharp and it's not altho interesting. I'd like to see the gun more or the scope. Cool setup/costume/gun.

    Feb 15th, 2011 Reply
    • leiko

      leiko

      Good point, Meng, More focus on gun or scope rather than on screw. Thanks for the feedback!

      Feb 15th, 2011 Reply Feel free to contact me
  • Deathrockluv

    Deathrockluv

    This looks real cool , the scope getting cut off on the left side tends to draw me towards that direction thou , its like drawing me away from the picture.

    Feb 15th, 2011 Reply
    • leiko

      leiko

      Thanks for the feedback. The original photo actually has the full scope, so I can fix that =)

      Feb 15th, 2011 Reply Feel free to contact me