Nude Study 3

philhorn

beautiful work :)

JurgenDoe

Congratulations on the Daily Inspiration! .. this is very well deserved.

Litavis

Congratulations!

Your art is very inspirational to all of us artists and at Shadowness we like to thank our amazing artists for all they do, to show our appreciation for you, your artwork has been featured in todays Daily Inspiration #350

http://shadowness.com/dailyinspiration/forum/daily-inspiration-350

zaur

this is funny - there is a naked girl on the picture, and people keep talking about design, coloring, legs and eyes. shhh, first minute i couldn't even notice the flowers...
you did a good job)

SuharLeonheart

Awesome lighting, atmosphere & character design

• hel999

  hel999

  Thanks!

  Jul 1st, 2011 Reply

Souls

very nice!!!

• hel999

  hel999

  Thank you!

  Jun 14th, 2011 Reply

leiko

My constructive two cents:

This one is lovely. I like how the hands are soft, and disappear. It makes her seem youthful, and keeps the attention on her face and body. There is a certain appealing awkwardness to the image (both the stock and your recreation). However, I think in making the body thinner, some of the proportions seem a bit off. The legs are a little too long/ far away from her in comparison to the length of her torso. In the original, her torso is curved a bit, due to her posture. If you fixed her posture to be straighter the length of her legs and the placement of her knees should be adjusted, as well. Also, the face in your recreation is placed a bit too close to the audience. It makes her appear as though the head is sitting on her shoulders, without a neck. I also wish the ground was more textured. I think if you made it appear more like a wrinkled up bedspread, it would add to the piece. Lovely use of colors, and soft strokes.

• hel999

  hel999

  Thank you for the detailed feedback. I will definitely look into the pose of her legs again - I knew something was bugging me there. Also about the neck... here she's looking straighter to the viewer than in the reference and I didn't really know what to do with the neck in order to make it fit. I'll try to see what I can do about that. Again, thank you so much for your wonderful critiques!!

  Jun 13th, 2011 Reply

bennybrand

great work on her body.. especially the eyes are nice!

Blood

me gusto mucho la suavidad del pintado ^-^

• hel999

  hel999

  Thanks! Gracias.

  Jun 5th, 2011 Reply

RAErcilla

nice tone and i really like what you did on her eyes.

• hel999

  hel999

  Thank you! For looking at the eyes;)

  Jun 5th, 2011 Reply