I like all the detail work in this piece. It looks quite impressive. I can see that you stylistically like bright lights, and a glowy effect. Because this is a design piece, like a poster, it works. I would seay the main improvement for this one would probably be the smokey effect. I get the impression it is supposed to be smoke, but I am unsure. It seems to be undecided, like it doesn't want to go all out. It wants to extend from the metal, but it isn't as slowy or floaty as it could be. I think if you want to have smoke, do it. If you don't, then don't. Because it looks undecided, I'm not sure what it is, and why it is there. I also think there could be more variation in the colors. I see about 3 or 4 shades of yellow, and about 4 shades of gray, but I think you can have more variation. In real life, if you look at a vehical, metallic surfaces are effected by the environment and the lights around it. I would expect bluish bits near the parts near his eyes and chest lights, and maybe tealish parts on the parts of his metal near the edges. Same with the gray bits. There can be parts which are more yellowed, blued, etc, which will increase the depth of your image.
that actually crossed my mind with that smoke effect. i want it to look like energy or force something. and then im thinking if im going to put it there or not. i just thought, oh. the hell with it! haha now i'll keep in mind, if you're doubting at something, dont pursue doing it xDD thank you again Karen.
MonzterGraphicz
cool
Oct 31st Replygreenapaul
thank you :)
Nov 13th ReplyMonzterGraphicz
you're welcome
Nov 14th ReplyJohnNorman
this is so coolL!!! mabuhay ang pinoy
Apr 17th, 2012 Replygreenapaul
Norman thank you so much!
Apr 22nd, 2012 ReplyJohnNorman
hehe welcome
Apr 23rd, 2012 ReplyMXRCOFER
So Cool!!!
Oct 21st, 2011 Replygreenapaul
thank you
Oct 21st, 2011 ReplyNei
whohoa!! you're so great man! :)
Oct 15th, 2011 Replygreenapaul
thank you .
Oct 15th, 2011 Replymarsiglia
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Sep 5th, 2011 Replygreenapaul
--> i really love this emoticons :))
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Oct 19th, 2011 Replypennyu
owowoowowowowow
Jul 30th, 2011 Replygreenapaul
tnxnxnxnx
Jul 31st, 2011 Replyleiko
Here is my constructive crit =)
Jul 22nd, 2011 ReplyI like all the detail work in this piece. It looks quite impressive. I can see that you stylistically like bright lights, and a glowy effect. Because this is a design piece, like a poster, it works. I would seay the main improvement for this one would probably be the smokey effect. I get the impression it is supposed to be smoke, but I am unsure. It seems to be undecided, like it doesn't want to go all out. It wants to extend from the metal, but it isn't as slowy or floaty as it could be. I think if you want to have smoke, do it. If you don't, then don't. Because it looks undecided, I'm not sure what it is, and why it is there. I also think there could be more variation in the colors. I see about 3 or 4 shades of yellow, and about 4 shades of gray, but I think you can have more variation. In real life, if you look at a vehical, metallic surfaces are effected by the environment and the lights around it. I would expect bluish bits near the parts near his eyes and chest lights, and maybe tealish parts on the parts of his metal near the edges. Same with the gray bits. There can be parts which are more yellowed, blued, etc, which will increase the depth of your image.
Overall, great job.
greenapaul
that actually crossed my mind with that smoke effect. i want it to look like energy or force something. and then im thinking if im going to put it there or not. i just thought, oh. the hell with it! haha now i'll keep in mind, if you're doubting at something, dont pursue doing it xDD thank you again Karen.
Jul 24th, 2011 Replyleiko
Always welcome
Jul 24th, 2011 Replyalvinabille
AA: awesome work :)
Jul 22nd, 2011 Replygreenapaul
thank you so much :)
Jul 22nd, 2011 Replyrenen
one of the best sir!
Jul 22nd, 2011 Replygreenapaul
thank you so much sir Renen!
Jul 22nd, 2011 ReplyFailuretalent
awesome
Jul 20th, 2011 Replygreenapaul
thank you
Jul 20th, 2011 ReplyFailuretalent
np i'll wait to see more from you :D
Jul 21st, 2011 Replygreenapaul
thank you so much :)
Jul 21st, 2011 ReplyFailuretalent
no problem dude :D
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