She remembered the look in the young mans eyes while aboard the airship. A look of loss and regret that she fully understood but was not sure why exactly. She heard him murmur something about a her eyes and being "too real". Then she recalled the sound of the compartment door being unlatched. As the wind from outside bombarded her senses the man slid a pair of antique goggles over her eyes. The sight of them sent an alarming feeling that she could not identify. "Goodbye" was all she heard the man say before she felt herself plummeting into an unknown world. "Is this like birth" she calmly wondered before everything turned to nothing. She awoke in a wasteland of familiar parts surrounding her. Parts that she knew only too well. She picked up one of the pieces and held it to her face. She stared into its empty sockets and recognized the face immediately. The face was her own. As she stared into the empty vessel she thought of only one word. Revenge.......
just a taste of a story my girl and I are working on, I'll probably rewrite it many times, hope you find it somewhat interesting. Please dont mind my poor writing skills.
I added a ton more details that I feel are a major improvement, hope you all agree. This is by far one of the funnest pieces of have had the pleasure of creating.
model: nastiaosipovastock http://nastiaosipovastock.deviantart.com/art/37-338560314
bg: lady-symphonia-stock http://lady-symphonia-stock.deviantart.com/art/Hope-135961782
random parts: selficide-stock http://selficide-stock.deviantart.com/art/AikoBot-Cyborg-001-90297841
more parts: mysticmorning http://mysticmorning.deviantart.com/
goggles: m3-productions ://m3-productions.deviantart.com/art/SPKR-10-217718982?q=gallery%3Am3-productions%2F2887821&qo=7
gears: jensstockcollection http://jensstockcollection.deviantart.com/art/gears-and-stuff-4613861
dirigible: momerath-stock http://momerath-stock.deviantart.com/art/Dirigible-135794780
the rest was all painted by me
Bojan1558
it' realy greate work !!
Jan 5th ReplyBergkristall
great work!
Dec 19th Replyevolver
thanks so much
Dec 20th ReplyBergkristall
you`re welcome!
Dec 23rd Reply09alex
excellent!
Dec 17th Replyevolver
thanks so much, I really tried too make something new with this one
Dec 17th Replyguilherme777
amazing
Dec 17th Replyevolver
thanks so much, I'm really brainstorming on what I'm going to do next with the story
Dec 17th Replyguilherme777
keep the good work then
Dec 17th Replyevolver
hope you keep checking it out, I'm working on a name to structure everything around the images. My first Idea is dylligin
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Dec 17th ReplyPipingskie
awesome!
Dec 17th ReplyBluecato
Total Creativity, Like the hair
Dec 16th Replyevolver
many thanks, glad you like it
Dec 16th ReplyCrille
superb work
Dec 16th Replyevolver
thanks
Dec 16th ReplyCrille
welcome :)
Dec 17th ReplyKhokoRahko
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Dec 15th ReplyiDarkZhane
amazing work...nice concept
Dec 15th Replyevolver
many thanks
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