one night stand by depaulus
depaulus

one night stand

by depaulus in Photoshop

http://www.forgotten-secrets.nl/foto_maison_hommel_urbex.htm
Please tell me what is good and what is not, so I can learn from you and improve my technique.

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  • WEIRD

    WEIRD

    GREAT STORY BEHIND THIS IMAGE MASTER DEP

    Sep 29th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
  • rickcorbett

    rickcorbett

    I like this....It's dramatic looking and has lots of emotion. The angle is great. The male figure seems a bit too close to the girl. I kind of feel there should be more of a space between them to make this more realistic. Other than that, I think you did a great job!

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      i see now that you are right about the male. it's those little details that I do not see. I should pay more attention on this. thanks for your helpfull comment.

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • rickcorbett

      rickcorbett

      You're very welcome! Again, you did a great job on this piece, it was just that tiny detail that struck me. But I absolutely love it otherwise :-)

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
  • Bergkristall

    Bergkristall

    cool! Beautiful work!

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
  • barfischer

    barfischer

    i love the closeness in this one..... as in a film drama.... love very much the colours... and the details... the carpet..the book on it.... the furniture... its style... the texture of the wall... this all creates a special closeness..... i don't like the doo dark left foreground... and i don't like the perspective which i feel its overdone....

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      hi. thanks for your comment. I tried to follow the shade in the room. I did not want to change the original photo to much so i left the perspective as it was. i changed the link to the original photo so you can see this. I am very pleased with your comments and will certainly use it in another project.

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      oh thank you!!! yes... just had a look at the link.... Paul... i think i know now.... the original has more foreground.... maybe that makes the perspective feel a little different.. i don't know... oh Paul... it is a very strong work.. with a very deep charisma....

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      Thank you very much. I always think, I'm missing something. it is not finished yet, but I do not see what.

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      give it a little more foreground.... that lets the perspective more flow.... and the room looks more 'finished'.... let me dwell upon a little more.... to maybe find out what you are missing.....

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      nice that you thinks along with me. on this picture i don't want to adjust anything now. done is done. but your ideas can show me what I did not do good.

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      i already told you, i think a little lighten the foreground.... and if i would change something else.... maybe a lil structure for the floor.... yes... you are right.... don't correct this one.... that's not good.... that would get a 'mushy' thing.....

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      thank for thinking with me. it's very helpfull

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
  • KalosysArt

    KalosysArt

    great artwork

    Aug 11th, 2012 Reply
  • JurgenDoe

    JurgenDoe

    very nice manip

    Aug 11th, 2012 Reply Subscriber