Nicely done! I love your work and the mood you set. Very dramatic. For me, there seems to be a bit too much light coming from the window. I also kind of feel there should be reflected light on the woman from the candle. Honestly, I think you did a splendid job with this. You are an amazing artist and very creative. Your work is very dramatic and has lots of emotion. Awesome job!
i like this one more than another one. i like the cat there and stairs and bg looks very good. i just dont like candle much ...the light of candle looks bad. you could play with lights and shadows a bit more....just my opinion :) but overall look is nice and interesting :)
hi Luci. thanks for your comment. it's very helpfull. you are wright about the candle light it is not good. i must learn to pay more attention to those details. . (i had sent you this by normal e-mail, maybe you did not get it)
for me... this is too artificial..... the pram looks very 'put into the composition'.... also the model is 'foreign' maybe too 'up to date' ? i don't know..... i love the idea with the stair... the room... i would try to 'slow down' a little the light... and get more texture in all... more 'warmth' as well..... the candle is a great idea, love it... maybe it could lighten the room a bit more ? but Paul.... that's only my thoughts.....