Loft by depaulus
depaulus

Loft

by depaulus in Photoshop

credits: http://www.forgotten-secrets.nl/foto_ecole_labyrinth.htm
Please tell me what is good and what is not, so I can learn from you and improve my technique.

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  • Comments:18 comments
  • Views:211 views
  • Submitted:Aug 11th, 2012
  • Resolution:1063x1594
  • Date Created:Aug 11th, 2012
  • Filesize:352 KB
  • Camera:Canon EOS-1Ds Mark III
  • Exposure:1/250
  • CCDWidth:6mm
  • Aperture:f/16.0
  • Focal Length:50mm
  • ISO Speed:125
  • Flash Fired:Flash did not fire, compulsory
  • Software:Adobe Photoshop CS5
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  • rickcorbett

    rickcorbett

    Nicely done! I love your work and the mood you set. Very dramatic. For me, there seems to be a bit too much light coming from the window. I also kind of feel there should be reflected light on the woman from the candle. Honestly, I think you did a splendid job with this. You are an amazing artist and very creative. Your work is very dramatic and has lots of emotion. Awesome job!

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      Than you very much for your comment. this is realy helpfull.

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • rickcorbett

      rickcorbett

      You're very welcome! I love your work and I truly think you are an amazing artist. I can't wait to see your next piece :)

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
  • Bergkristall

    Bergkristall

    wonderful my friend!

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
  • Lucifer

    Lucifer

    i like this one more than another one. i like the cat there and stairs and bg looks very good. i just dont like candle much ...the light of candle looks bad. you could play with lights and shadows a bit more....just my opinion :) but overall look is nice and interesting :)

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply who wants a hug?
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      hi Luci. thanks for your comment. it's very helpfull. you are wright about the candle light it is not good. i must learn to pay more attention to those details. . (i had sent you this by normal e-mail, maybe you did not get it)

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • Lucifer

      Lucifer

      oh i didnt check my emails yet ...thank you for reminding me anyway its great work, Paul and i like to see you improve so fast :)) you are welcome and i am going to check my emails have a nice day!

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply who wants a hug?
  • barfischer

    barfischer

    for me... this is too artificial..... the pram looks very 'put into the composition'.... also the model is 'foreign' maybe too 'up to date' ? i don't know..... i love the idea with the stair... the room... i would try to 'slow down' a little the light... and get more texture in all... more 'warmth' as well..... the candle is a great idea, love it... maybe it could lighten the room a bit more ? but Paul.... that's only my thoughts.....

    Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      Hi, the pram is in the original photo, no ps. (see the link) to make the room darker is a good idea also more warmt would make it better. thanks again for your tips.

      Aug 12th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      am sure the next one comes out masterfully because you are a great artist !!

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      careful with compliments. otherwise I walk past my shoes!

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      hahaaa.... so i have to go on... as i wish to see you walk past your shoes :-))))))) seriously..... i mean this very honestly !!!!!!!!

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      oh ehm... with 'this' i mean you are really a great artist....i had a look at your link to the dutch site.... really fantastic work !!!!!

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      you mean the urban site?

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
    • barfischer

      barfischer

      i mean the site www.depaulus which you added on your shadowness site... with the graphic work and the photos.....

      Aug 13th, 2012 Reply
  • KalosysArt

    KalosysArt

    amazing job!

    Aug 11th, 2012 Reply