Fleur by depaulus
depaulus

Fleur

by depaulus in Photoshop

Please tell me what is good and what is not, so I can learn from you and improve my technique. All photo's are mine except the factory which is from. http://www.forgotten-secrets.nl/foto_ecvb_powerplant.htm

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  • Litavis

    Litavis

    I agree with /JurgenDoe.
    The shading on it is a bit dark and the picture doesn't pop out as much and it's kind of hard to see your work.
    The birds need some motion to look more realistic and its impossible to human eye to recognize red color in the dark.

    The horses legs are on the ground,you should try to put some parts inside the leaves.

    I also think some effects could have been done better,such as the woman model, it could have been more faded, and blended into to give it a shadow like look.

    Don't use so much the burn tool,it destroys your work.
    Sorry about how negative I have been.I'm in no way a expert but through practice and critiques we all learn.

    Sep 12th, 2012 Reply
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      thanks for your comments, it is very helpful. I will definitely keep in it mind for my next project, and will do this one over. I don't see it as negative but as positive comment. you are both right about the shadow and light. i will delete this one. as soon as i have the new one ready i will post it again and i hope you wil give me again youre opinion. Thank you very much.

      Sep 12th, 2012 Reply
    • Litavis

      Litavis

      No,don't delete it,we must remember your progress

      Sep 12th, 2012 Reply
  • JurgenDoe

    JurgenDoe

    the image itself is to dark and there is no shadow to see .. where light is there is shadow

    Sep 12th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      thanks for your comments, it is very helpful. I will definitely keep in it mind for my next project, and will do this one over. you are both right about the shadow and light. i will delete this one. as soon as i have the new one ready i will post it again and i hope you wil give me again youre opinion. Thank you very much.

      Sep 12th, 2012 Reply
    • JurgenDoe

      JurgenDoe

      If you work with different layers in a manip always look very the light is coming frome .. especially in this part it comes from the moon behind the scene

      Sep 13th, 2012 Reply Subscriber
    • depaulus

      depaulus

      Yes I see now what you both mean. I need to pay more attention to the details. Thanks for the tips.

      Sep 13th, 2012 Reply
    • JurgenDoe

      JurgenDoe

      always a pleasure .. I did the same mistakes in my beginnings :)

      Sep 13th, 2012 Reply Subscriber