Fever Dream.

Lyrilith

That movie and soundtrack are VERY inspiring. ^^
Like the result of your inspiration alot! Colors and lighting are perfect!

drowninsanity

Love the pose and eye design. There is something missing though, can't place my finger on it..

7Shadows

Again, I don't think the background is doing justice to the superb pose you pulled for this one. 300 is definitely a good inspiration, but that smoke is weird -- doesn't flow well, but still a pretty good try.

for a start, I'd just use the eraser at 50% and 300 and remove a little of that smoke around the lower body/hand. top right smokes look fine.

• cJessicaPyne

  cJessicaPyne

  Awh, I like it how it is :[

  Jun 27th, 2007 Reply
• 7Shadows

  7Shadows

  sorry! i just think that the photo is so amazing that the PS retouches shouldn't take away from it so much... feel free to disregard my suggestions. and i'll stop critiquing! haha :)

  Jun 27th, 2007 Reply
• cJessicaPyne

  cJessicaPyne

  No, keep critiquing, I just thought I'd done a good job :P haha, don't worry about it.

  Jun 27th, 2007 Reply
• 7Shadows

  7Shadows

  oh don't misunderstand... you are doing a good job. my suggestions are there for you to do perhaps a greater job, of course, in my humble opinion. you want to achieve the 300 inspiration, and in my opinion, i could suggest you those to reach that objective better. :D

  Jun 27th, 2007 Reply