Flori II by Veiz

Flori II

by Veiz in Pencil Art

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  • StSoulbane


    very nice drawing, the portrait looks great and the level of detail is astounding.
    maybe a few remarks, (if I'm allowed to make them ;) )
    the drawing (and several other in your portfolio as well) looks like its three distinct drawings/ styles to it; the face, the figure/ body & raven, and the background.
    all these have a different set of tonal values, level of detail, highlight structure and overall appearance. This gives the drawing a bit of an unfinished look. the attention is primarily on the face and less on the drawing as a whole. I would focus more on the harmonizing the different elements of the drawing in one style.
    also don't be afraid of usine black, the darkest darks are of uniform "blackness" , but right now have several different lighter grays.
    last one do'n't forget the direction of the light source. The shadows on the hilt of the blade have a different angle than on the face.
    hope this helps you a bit,

    Mar 3rd, 2014 Reply
    • Veiz


      As I will never stop learning as I keep on drawing, I always appreciate constructive critique! Very good advices indeed! Much appreciated!

      Mar 3rd, 2014 Reply
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  • witchi1976


    This is my favourite of your drawings

    Jun 28th, 2011 Reply
    • Veiz


      Thank you so much! Also one of my personal favs!

      Jun 29th, 2011 Reply
  • Kothirat


    She has such a beautiful smile. I think this was one of the first pieces of your work that I saw. I LOVE it!!!

    Jun 3rd, 2011 Reply
  • Dabull


    The detail you achieve in your work is exceptional, excellent piece Brian

    May 29th, 2011 Reply
  • Dynnnad


    What an amazing drawing, such great work!!

    May 27th, 2011 Reply
  • BrigitteFredensborg


    Congratulations for the Daily Inspiration Feature! ♥

    May 19th, 2011 Reply
  • Merlin111


    Congratulations on your feature Brian and well deserved and this is one of you best pieces. The details are fantastic.

    May 19th, 2011 Reply
    • Veiz


      Thank you so much, Allen! Very appreciated!

      May 19th, 2011 Reply
  • Nataly1st


    ♥ Congrats on the Daily Feature, dear Brian!! ♥

    May 19th, 2011 Reply
  • JurgenDoe


    Congrats on the Daily Inspiration Feature ^_^

    May 19th, 2011 Reply Subscriber