this is part of a book assignment I have to do. We basically have to do an 8 page book on whatever we want as long as we do all the artwork inside it. So I figured that it would probably be a better idea for me to do a portfolio booklet instead of a story book thing with the amount of time I have to complete all 8 images (2 weeks) =___=;;;;
Martin
I love it rinn, the blue color is beautiful aswell as the chosen colors for the forms. and then of course the shapes in general. I agree with Tricks on the spaces but apart form that its great. I would however ditch the white shape at the right bottom, i find it distracting without a purpuse but thats me, good lcuk on your assignment and hope everything is good with you
Nov 16th, 2007 Reply Shadowness staffTricks
Its a lovely design, i just think you need to align things better, the gaps are thin in some places and then thick in other area's and it doesnt fit very well like that.
Nov 13th, 2007 Reply SubscriberBut i love the colours very vibrant and they stand out well.
Rinn
thanks, and yeah the spacing is the main thing i need to correct on here. cuz i know my teacher spazzes out when things aren't spaced out equally. i also want to put some color on the white swirly thingies on the right side probably. thx tho
Nov 13th, 2007 Reply7Shadows
This looks good. It's GOOD that you're working on your Portfolio.
Nov 12th, 2007 Reply