I agree AKi.. yes, yes you are right.. i should have thought about it... Man they gave me the design invitation on a very short notice u know... don ask.. But i should have thought on the detail being lost due to orange color...I will keep this in head from now on...
I do like your concept and use of colour, I think it's a strong image but when I look at the details, I think the logo is way too close to the trophy and should be more noticeable among the design or incorporated to fit in, it looks like it is just placed in at the top. The swirls I think are bit of a different style than the rest of the shapes in the design so it looks a bit off. But I like the character designs, you don't really see them at first but when you see them I think they fit pretty nicely. :)
yeah the florals (swirls) are not confident i should have improved them a bit more. About the logo.. mmm actually client don wanted the logo to be the main focus but also to be the part of design.. so That is why i kept it close to florals so that is something required.. but there is always a way to do design work and might be mine was not proper regarding logo placement..
Collectively thanx for giving time and guideline...
I agree with "Caja", I really like it on the first glance but when I look into the details of the composition, I think you need to fix the ornaments (such as the curls objects and another objects on the upper part). In my opinion I think it would be good if you manage the details, decide to choose thick or thin in every ornament objects and I think it's help to show a good detail :D. But still, I like the concept, the colors that you've picked, the illustration character style that you've made.
good eye u have there man.. u know this was a quick design but still... i know there are loose points in the curves by the war i call them florals not sure what do u mean by ornaments..mm so yes you are right VEC MASTER... points NOTED.. :).. refining the work is always good... thanx for alerting me again...
Hm... I like it on first glance but when I look deeper I see some stuff I am unsure about. The right side looks more like you've missed to make some of it blue rather than it's part of the design, you could for example have inverted it (the places it's orange on the other side make them blue on the right side) since you really have done so with the two guys' hair and feet. Overall design is nice.
Yeah but I didn't mean about the design to be mirrored, I just talked about the colours and not the actual design and you answered you had mirrored the design and that wasn't what I was talking about. I know the design is mirrored and I like that but on some places on the right side I feel there should be blue since it is so on the other side.
So nothing bad about your design, I like it. It was only some of the colours which wasn't mirrored which I talked about.