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RehanKhan
a t-shirt concept for 99designs.com on a very short notice. total time 7 hours
Adobe Illustrator CS4
Wacom Intous 4 Medium Tablet
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- Submitted:Jun 16th, 2011
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CrystalGraphic
A lovely tshirt design :) You need to send it to designbyhumans.com :D
Jun 26th, 2011 ReplyAki
Looks good! I like the design and concept. I am not sure about the choose of colores here. Orange is the distraction and loss of contrast in your design (from far). Overall is good.
Jun 19th, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
I agree AKi.. yes, yes you are right.. i should have thought about it... Man they gave me the design invitation on a very short notice u know... don ask.. But i should have thought on the detail being lost due to orange color...I will keep this in head from now on...
Jun 20th, 2011 ReplyThanx
Aki
No worries! you did well.
Jun 22nd, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
and you pointed out a good point very well :)..
Jun 22nd, 2011 ReplyAki
hehe thanks!
Jun 22nd, 2011 ReplyFamz
I do like your concept and use of colour, I think it's a strong image but when I look at the details, I think the logo is way too close to the trophy and should be more noticeable among the design or incorporated to fit in, it looks like it is just placed in at the top. The swirls I think are bit of a different style than the rest of the shapes in the design so it looks a bit off. But I like the character designs, you don't really see them at first but when you see them I think they fit pretty nicely. :)
Jun 18th, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
yeah the florals (swirls) are not confident i should have improved them a bit more. About the logo.. mmm actually client don wanted the logo to be the main focus but also to be the part of design.. so That is why i kept it close to florals so that is something required.. but there is always a way to do design work and might be mine was not proper regarding logo placement..
Jun 20th, 2011 ReplyCollectively thanx for giving time and guideline...
MY BEST
TRACELANDVCTRIE
Hello brother,
Jun 17th, 2011 ReplyI agree with "Caja", I really like it on the first glance but when I look into the details of the composition, I think you need to fix the ornaments (such as the curls objects and another objects on the upper part). In my opinion I think it would be good if you manage the details, decide to choose thick or thin in every ornament objects and I think it's help to show a good detail :D. But still, I like the concept, the colors that you've picked, the illustration character style that you've made.
RehanKhan
good eye u have there man.. u know this was a quick design but still... i know there are loose points in the curves by the war i call them florals not sure what do u mean by ornaments..mm so yes you are right VEC MASTER... points NOTED.. :).. refining the work is always good... thanx for alerting me again...
Jun 18th, 2011 ReplyTRACELANDVCTRIE
haha, I'm no master, I still learn and keep practice 'til now :D. Btw, you very welcome brother :D. Keep it up!
Jun 18th, 2011 ReplyCaja
Hm... I like it on first glance but when I look deeper I see some stuff I am unsure about. The right side looks more like you've missed to make some of it blue rather than it's part of the design, you could for example have inverted it (the places it's orange on the other side make them blue on the right side) since you really have done so with the two guys' hair and feet. Overall design is nice.
Jun 17th, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
Caja actually the colors on right and left is same way i want i do experiment with colors to see how the LINKING COMES UP in whole design... thanx for the attention to details :)
Jun 18th, 2011 ReplyCaja
Yes, I didn't mean you should change the colours to something else but to mirror the colours but inverted now it's orange in some places on the right side which I would like it to be blue for example.
Jun 19th, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
i mirrored it exactly but changed the color simple is that.. might be if there was another case i would have followed your advise
Jun 20th, 2011 ReplyCaja
Hm... I'm not sure I am explaining it that well. ^^;
Jun 20th, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
you explained it clearly.. i have no confusion.. and i respect your opinion :)
Jun 22nd, 2011 ReplyCaja
Yeah but I didn't mean about the design to be mirrored, I just talked about the colours and not the actual design and you answered you had mirrored the design and that wasn't what I was talking about. I know the design is mirrored and I like that but on some places on the right side I feel there should be blue since it is so on the other side.
Jun 23rd, 2011 ReplySo nothing bad about your design, I like it. It was only some of the colours which wasn't mirrored which I talked about.
Sorry ♥
Dynnnad
That's an awesome design man, really like the colours you've used. Makes it lively and cheerful!
Jun 17th, 2011 Reply Helloistian18kenji
this is nice.
Jun 17th, 2011 ReplyVictorior
Hey, Nice design! Cheers
Jun 17th, 2011 ReplyRehanKhan
thanx for the words and being the first one to comment.. cheers SIR!
Jun 17th, 2011 Reply