It's interesting but hm... it's hard since it's something that makes it less good than your others, I can't pinpoint it. Might be the focus. I think it would have been better without the star in the front.
I'm using a new camera... rather than my p&s with telescope lens, I'm using a dslr with reverse lens. I like it less than the other way, need to get my real maco lens. That's probably what it is. Focus is kind of soft and random this way.