Triple Me

luminire

you're apart of triplets? niiice. awwh and you're all wearing the same clothing! ^^ ♥
lol j/k. nice work with stitching them together, but i can still see the edge between the left and middle photos. ;/

pixelpro

Hi, I think you the vignette didn't work for this picture. I like the concept tho, I wish you used the burn tool to add more color to the white skin and add details or midtones and shadow. This picture can be more interesting of you position the camera at side or somewhere other than the front. You can also play with movements by using a slow shutter speed you can move around and perhaps the model can interact with her other self. :) Just thinking out loud. :)

• leiko

  leiko

  that is actually a great idea! have the different selves interact =)

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• enii

  enii

  That would definitely up the appeal of this photograph :) very helpful critique!

  Aug 4th, 2007 Reply

enii

A good attempt, but as I've said before and I'll say it again, Photoshopping a photograph too much will often ruin the quality of your image. Where your quality may have been nice and sharp before, it now looks noisy, discolored, and washed out. It looks like a bad-quality photograph.

Compositionally, it's quite interesting and like leiko said, the poses are diverse and the patterns are appealing. From the thumbnail view, I can appreciate the effort you put into it. Once I enlarge the image however, where it should have actually looked better, Photoshopping becomes all too apparent.

The spotlight is very unnatural as well and the too-much cyan that leiko refers to is very obvious as well, and it looks like the result of bad lighting, but it might be post-photo processing?

Overall, I enjoy your efforts at pursuing new ideas and new methods in your photography. It is very interesting seeing your progression as improvement as you move along, but I do enjoy your photographs more with less Photoshop and results more directed from the camera.

leiko

the poses are interesting and diverse, and the runner tablecloth and other different patterns and textiles add a lot of flavor to the piece, but the color looks very washed out and too cyan, and in full view, the texture seems odd. (did you use a filter?) overall, interesting experiment, but the coloring makes the picture look like something form the 80s. i want to see it crisper