Midnight by APaperFaceOnParade

APaperFaceOnParade

Midnight

by APaperFaceOnParade in Photography #1

I'd really appreciate feedback on this particular piece, thanks!o

Comments:4 comments
Views:599 views
Submitted:Jul 27th, 2007
Resolution:912x1162
Date Created:Jul 27th, 2007
Filesize:132 KB
Camera:DMC-FZ50
Exposure:10/1250
Aperture:f/3.6
Focal Length:32.6mm
ISO Speed:100
Flash Fired:Flash did not fire, compulsory
Software:Adobe Photoshop Elem
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killadore
killadore

agree with Tricks. also, it's distracting that it appears to be slightly tilted, and it could use just a bit of sharpening ;) interesting subject though, keep going!
Jul 27th, 2007 Reply
- APaperFaceOnParade
  
  APaperFaceOnParade
  
  thanks for the critique! I'll definitely work on it.
  Jul 28th, 2007 Reply
Tricks
Tricks

I think it would work better from a different angle, either from below it or in front of it so you can see the light shining on the surface behind the lantern.

At the moment there doesn't seem to be alot to grab your attention per say.
Jul 27th, 2007 Reply Shadow Dragon
- APaperFaceOnParade
  
  APaperFaceOnParade
  
  yeah, I understand what you mean. thanks for the critique!
  Jul 27th, 2007 Reply