Ballet by APaperFaceOnParade
APaperFaceOnParade

critique, please!! [:

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  • wishingstar

    wishingstar

    personally, i feel that the comp is slightly cluttered... and no central focus.... i think you can make the clouds go together to have more of a depth feel as well as the 2 dancers (so there is some interaction..) <- but that's just me

    good work =)

    Nov 24th, 2007 Reply