I appreciate the details, but there area a lot of elements that could be improved. For example, the lighting on her cheek is a bit weird. The composition is busy and that burn spot on the far left is unnecessary. I like the colour theme!
It's fine this way. It reminds me I have to work harder. And I also like to test other styles. I don't like to stay in "one box". Even if it means it's not that good, it helps me going forward. :)